Tuesday, July 08, 2008

SCRIPPED - SO EASY AN 8 YEAR OLD CAN USE IT


By Jim Cirile

Back in May, we filled you in on Scripped.com, the revolutionary new FREE online screenwriting software. We did a little test run with the software and gave it thumbs up (if you missed it, it’s up on our blog HERE.) So if you’re still using MS Word to write screenplays, brother, do yourself and the world a favor and give Scripped.com a whirl.

So here’s an interesting bit of putting-your-money-where-your-mouth is. Long-time CI blog and newsletter readers know my 8 year old daughter is a very creative, imaginative type. I’ve written previously about my efforts to keep her from gravitating towards screenwriting and moviemaking, only because overprotective dad doesn’t want to see his little punkin go through years of punishing rejection and frustration (like all the rest of us.) But of course, this was a futile undertaking. As early as 7 years old, she was helping flag typos on scripts (comma before *and* after all direct addresses, sweetie) and asking fairly advanced questions about things like story and conflict. Just today she asked me if I knew that the Captain in WALL-E was going to stand (you gotta see it.) And I said, “Yeah, because it was logical that would be his arc.” And she said, “I thought so, too.”

So it was no surprise when a few weeks ago she asked for my help inputting a handful of pages, handwritten in crude screenplay format, into the computer. ‘Twas her first script – an epic kids/fantasy/adventure called MYSTERY DRAGONS. My first thought was, okay, I can teach her Final Draft. But then I thought about it some more, and I decided, you know what? There’s too many things she could get stuck on with FD. Plus my copy is out of installs, which means she’d have to have a copy of the disk in every time she used it… or I’d have to pay again for another license. Nothing against FD, by the way, which I use myself and find to be very good software (but for a few minor annoyances.) But I wanted something SIMPLE. And then the lightbulb went off.

My daughter is now the youngest enrolled user of Scripped.com.

The great thing is, because Scripped is not quite as full-featured as FD, it actually makes it easier to use. Within 20 minutes I had explained what the Character, Parenthetical, Action, Dialogue, General and Transition tabs were, and VROOM, off she went. But for a few general issues with things like spelling, (Scripped actually has a full-function spell check, yay) where to skip spaces and capitalize words, and what goes in the parentheses, she was off and running with no hiccups.

One of the founders of Scripped told me they’ve been getting calls from Final Draft and Movie Magic. It appears those guys are worried. They should be.

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And thus I am proud to announce Coverage, Ink’s new association with Scripped.com. Coverage, Ink will be providing preferred screenplay analysis and consultation services to Scripped members through Coverage by Scripped, powered by Coverage, Ink. We think that Scripped is the wave of the future. And based on the thousands of registered users in countries around the world, a lot of other people feel the same way. Scripped is quickly becoming a force to be reckoned with.

So, all of you, you no longer have any excuse for poor formatting. You no longer need to be able to afford Final Draft or Movie Magic Screenwriter! Kick MS Word to the curb. Give Scripped a test spin and see what you think.

Yes, It's an Actual Store. For Writers.

Interview with Writers Store president Jesse Douma
By Jim Cirile

One of the first things I did upon moving to L.A. was to head over to The Writers Store at 2040 Westwood Blvd. This legendary shop represented so much to me. Here was an actual STORE for WRITERS. Even in NY, where I’m from, there’s no store writers can call their own. Simply walking in there and browsing the books and chatting with a helpful associate, it really made me feel like I had arrived in Hollywood. I’ve been back there many times since. In these days of brick and mortar businesses being crushed by the big e-tailers, it’s nice to know that The Writers Store is not only still around, but they’re ramping things up with new services, events and Storylink, an online writing community second to none. If you sometimes feel alone and adrift as a writer in L.A. look no further the helpful folks at The Writers Store.

I sat down to talk with Writers Store president & member Jesse Douma about all the things these guys are up to. And check out their online store at www.thewriterstore.com.


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Jim Cirile: Can you tell us a little about your background?

Jesse Douma: I’m originally from New York, but at this point I’ve lived on the west coast so long I can’t even really claim any New York roots. I moved out here to California to go to school, because it’s a lot cheaper if you’re a resident. While I was doing that, I started working for my dad and stepmom’s business, which at the time was The Writers Computer Store back in ’86. The store actually started in ’82. At the time, I was just doing odd jobs around the store to make some money while I was going to school. I found that I really enjoyed it, and I started moving through the different positions. I became a computer tech for a while, worked my way through every role and liked it so much that when I finished school, I decided to make it my profession. I eventually became a partner and then the president.


JC: Dad was cool with keeping it all in the family, right?

JD: Yeah. He had his vision and got the ball rolling, and over time we were able to add many new things. There was no internet back then to speak of, and we’ve grown a lot in that area. Now they relax up on the Oregon coast, and I keep bugging ‘em whenever I need to.

JC: Are you a writer yourself? Did you try to jump aboard the band wagon during the spec boom of the ‘90s?

JD: I’ve always thought of myself as the guy who’s selling picks and shovels during the Gold Rush. It never really occurred to me to try to throw my hat into the ring. I have gone through the process of writing, but I wasn’t bit by the writing bug until midstream at The Writers Store. It wasn’t exactly the crap-plus-one scenario of walking out of a movie and saying, “I can do better than that,” but I did become fascinated with the whole process and saw how enjoyable it was for those that were doing it… as they completed their projects, not necessarily in the middle. (laughs) I had a few ideas, and I went through the process. I wrote treatments and turned them into screenplays, which have still only been read by myself. But it was a great experience to see exactly what our clients encounter, and it’s something I hope to return back to, because I really found that I love writing, when I have the time for it.

JC: It’s really remarkable to me is that you guys actually have a physical store. Where else can you go and find a store that sells stuff for writers? That’s such a frickin’ cool thing, I can’t even tell you.

JD: I know what you mean. In a way, we’re almost a beacon for people coming into town. It’s great having the physical location, because we do serve people from around the world, and whenever they’re in Los Angeles -- either moving here or on vacation -- we’re a destination. I look at it as being a candy store for writers, between the fasteners and the books and all that stuff. When people come in, it’s not uncommon that they’ll be here for an hour or more just looking around.

Having a physical location also means we’re a meeting place for writers, especially if they’re on the west side. It’s pretty neat, and as much as we love the online arena, it’s really nice to have that in-person contact that a store gives you. Plus the physical location allows us to have free events every week, where you can come in and sit down with 15 other Writers Store clients and hear how to budget your first film or how to use Final Draft or any of the tools. We have a lot of free workshops. They’re a lot of fun and very rewarding.

JC: It must cost a buck to keep that store on Westwood Blvd. going, and yet Writers Store prices are as good or better than anywhere else. How do you do that?

JD: We’re the largest provider of these tools worldwide, so a lot of it is just volume, but it’s also something we factor in to the cost of doing business. We could probably have higher profits if we didn’t have this location, but at the same, it seems that it’s a service we should be providing. We get calls every day. It could be anything from how many fasteners to use to bind my screenplay or specific questions regarding character development. We’re able to field those over the phone, but it’s not the same as in person. I think we enjoy that contact as much as our clients do. It is very expensive to have such a large store in the high-rent area where we’re at, but it’s just a part of doing business, and we choose not to pass those costs along to our clients.

JC: So what exactly is Storylink?

JD: Storylink (http://www.storylink.com) is a division of The Writers Store. It came about for many reasons, one of which was that we found that our clients not only here in Los Angeles but around the world were looking for a place to meet up and communicate and get feedback from like-minded people. So we developed it as a community, but it’s developed into being much more than that.

JC: And is there any cost for people to join?

JD: No, Storylink is a free site. All the content, the groups, the events, everything on there is free. There are some premium services that do involve some expense. One of them is called Pitch Perfect, and it’s a video and text pitching system where storytellers from around the world log in, upload their video or text pitch into a secure area of Storylink that only approved industry users have access to. The idea is to remove some of those barriers that exist and allow fresh material to come into Hollywood. On the agents or producers’ side, it’s nice because it’s all filtered by genre, and on the storytellers’ side, it’s a safe, secure place that they can market their material, and they don’t even have to upload a complete screenplay. They can just put up a logline and synopsis and hopefully a video pitch, so the person watching can really get a sense of who’s behind the story.

So that’s one premium service, and then another is an area called Services at Storylink, which is a marketplace for preproduction services such as coverage, written notes, anything that has to do with the written page before it goes into production, you can find in our user area, and like an eBay system, there are user ratings, so you can get a sense of who you’re working with and what their past experience has been. But the most popular area of Storylink has to be the groups. There are hundreds of groups. It’s a great place to get together and meet other people who have a common interest.

JC: There’s always an impressive amount of free content up there, too, all written by industry pros, which I find pretty cool. Now with Pitch Perfect, how do you vet the producers and industry types who subscribe?

JD: They apply, and an application consists of them creating an account and listing their professional experience along with some references. We then check those references to make sure that the person is who they say they are. Once we’ve confirmed their information, we give them access. But at the same time, we log every access to every pitch, so we always know whichever agency has accessed this story on this particular date.

JC: As a veteran inkTip.com user, one thing I’ve noticed is that many of their industry subscribers are these below-the-radar companies who aren’t getting serviced by agencies. Now that’s not a slam, because oftentimes those guys maybe had a studio deal once or had some things made but are now hungry again, or they’re up-and-coming guys trying to make their bones who really hustle. I think a lot of opportunities and careers are made from dealing with people like that. Where are you guys at in terms of your industry subscribers?

JD: Well, we just launched, so I would say we’re pretty much where inkTip is at. I agree, there’s nothing wrong with the lesser-known execs that are out there. Everyone has to start somewhere, and generally (those guys) will work a lot harder for you because, you know, they need to (laughs.) But where we’re really trying to set ourselves apart, other than the video pitch and I think a more streamlined system, is that we provide our service for free to all Writers Guild members as well as all the top contest winners. And what that does is it gives us additional material into our system from established writers so that we’re able to attract some of the higher level execs. They know that in that pool of material, they’re not only going to have those hidden gems (from) the newbie writer but also Writers Guild members who maybe are no longer on a show, or for whatever reason their agents aren’t shopping their material the way they would like it to be shopped. So that is attracting a higher caliber of execs, plus we have a lot of those inkTip-type execs, too.

JC: Let’s say someone is considering buying Final Draft, for example. What’s an advantage for a writer to get it from you guys as opposed to amazon.com, for example?

JD: There’s a number of things. One is that we’re a place you can call. So if you’re not even sure that Final Draft is the right product for you—it does come down to the differences between some of the products out there, and that’s where we can really shine. You want someone who can really help determine the product that is going to be best for your specific needs, and that’s on the software level or even on the book level. Amazon will give you a description of a book, but it won’t tell you that in chapter two, there are these great three pages that cover character development that are worth the price of the book just for that. My staff reads nearly every book title that comes through here, and they can really guide someone to the product that best fits their needs. And then after the purchase, we’re still here. So we’re able to fill in the support gaps or answer general questions that don’t fall under manufacturer’s support, such as, “What should be on my title page?” My team has a lot of information that they’ll pass along at no charge because we want to help them succeed at their creative goals.

JC: Awesome, man. Thanks for taking the time. And I have to mention, I love that you can just walk over to your store on Westwood Blvd. and buy the *right freakin’ brads,* which you can’t buy at any other store, it seems. I mean, that may seem like a little thing, but having the right brads (Acco genuine brass #6) that won’t fall apart when you read the script, and having a place to get them, well, that’s a damn community service, bro.

JD:
(laughs) It’s funny, though. Those brads -- not only do we sell them off the floor all day long like an ice cream shop, but we ship them all over the world. You can pick up fasteners in other locations, but they’re never the right ones. They’re either too cheap, too flimsy… I hate to say it, but the Hollywood system looks for any reason to not read a script, and it does sometimes come down to a wrong cover or wrong fasteners. You can’t give them any reason to kick it into the pile.

Symbolism in Horror

Symbols - objects, characters, figures, or colors used to represent abstract ideas or concepts.

Symbolizing Concepts: 13 Common Objects and Abstracts of Horror

By Sara C. Caldwell

Most films use patterns or specific objects as metaphors for a concept that the film is trying to convey. In horror movies, many such objects are used to intensify mood, identify character traits, emphasize themes and concepts (e.g. good and evil), and foreshadow events. Objects can be powerful symbols that add depth and meaning to a story.

Horror films try to capture our worst nightmares. As Carl G. Jung observed in his book Man and His Symbols (1979): "Commonplace objects or ideas can assume such powerful psychic significance in a dream that we may awake seriously disturbed, in spite of having dreamed of nothing worse than a locked room or a missed train" and “As a general rule, the unconscious aspect of any event is revealed to us in dreams, where it appears not as a rational thought but as a symbolic image."

Writers can use objects that appeal to our unconscious in this way for added, subtle dimension to reinforce themes. Some of the most common symbolic objects found in horror include:

1. Religious Symbols – Religion is very prevalent in horror, with themes of life and death, spirituality, man playing god, man fighting inner as well as outer demons, good versus evil, and so forth. Religious artifacts may be Christian, occult, satanic, voodoo, or about any other type of belief in something greater than humanity. In The Skeleton Key (2005), hospice worker Caroline Ellis is a skeptic and does not believe in the supernatural, even though hoodoo items and legends surround her in the swampy, primitive homestead where she cares for an elderly man, Ben. As Ben believes in the hoodoo magic, Caroline pieces together more and more about the lynching of a slave couple who performed hoodoo in the attic, and her belief system begins to shift. She learns about the jujus, spell-books and recorded conjurations she discovers in the attic and begins to perform rituals herself. In the end, her fear makes her a believer and this is her downfall, as it is what the slaves, who have lived on in the bodies of others, needed to take over her body. She let the symbolic objects overpower her reasoning.

2. Symbols of Death – Death is naturally pervasive in horror and there are countless representative objects, such as coffins, gravestones, skeletons, angels of death, and so forth. In Psycho (1960), the taxidermy birds are representative of the dead mother in the home and Bates’ schizophrenic attempts to keep her alive after death. In horror, there can be confusion between life and death, such as ghosts, zombies, and the supernatural, so objects can help symbolize who is on which side. Toward the beginning of Jacob’s Ladder (1990), Jacob gets trapped in an underground tunnel, which is symbolic of his being trapped between life and death. The rushing train which barely misses him on the track is filled with disfigured faces, lost souls like him. As he suffers more and more hallucinations and his life spins out of control, the only comfort he finds is with his chiropractor Louis, who he describes as an overgrown cherub. We later discover he is in fact an angel. Louis tells Jacob the truth about his situation, though Jacob can’t comprehend its real meaning at the time:

LOUIS
(continuing)
You know what he said? The only thing
that burns in Hell is the part of you
that won't let go of your life; your
memories, your attachments. They burn
'em all away. But they're not punish-
ing you, he said. They're freeing
your soul.


The fire that Jacob ignites at an Army headquarters (he blames the army for his hallucination from experiments they conducted on him) represents his need to burn away his attachments and memories of life. Fire symbolically recurs many times in the film and Jacob is literally consumed by it before being able to finally leave his hellish purgatory:

Subtle phospheresence begins to glow in the liquid beneath JACOB's feet. He steps away from it, but it follows his movement. Suddenly, as if by spontaneous combustion, it bursts into flames. JACOB screams and tries to run but the flames move with him, lapping at his legs. He cannot escape them. As far and as fast as he runs the fire is with him. He yells and cries and screams as the fire eats at his lower limbs. He falls and jumps back up again, his hands charred. His eyes grow wild.

JACOB
Oh, God, help me.

Instantly the flames roar and engulf him. It is total conflagration. Jacob's skin blisters and turns black. His flesh crackles. Writhing in pain,
he runs through the flames but can find no freedom from his suffering.

All at once, Jacob stops running. He throws his hands up into the burning air and stands motionless, in absolute agony. It is a gesture of total submission and surrender to forces beyond himself. His flesh bubbles and chars, but something is suddenly quiet inside him.

3. Colors – Many films use color to symbolize themes and the powers of good and evil. Red is often associated with evil, blood, lust, and violence, for example the Red Queen in Resident Evil (2002). Black is also naturally associated with evil, while light, neutral colors or earth tones are associated with good or the general populace. While screenwriters shouldn’t overdo wardrobe descriptions, describing the color and texture of objects or wardrobe can be useful if it is essential to the character. Consider this description of Bob Corso from The Ninth Gate (1999). A few descriptive sentences clearly help us visualize this man:

We now discover the speaker, BOB CORSO: a tall, lean, rather unkempt man in his 30's. Steel-rimmed glasses, crumpled old tweed jacket, worn cords, scuffed brown oxfords. He could almost be a shabby university teacher if it weren't for the street-wise glint in his eye.

4. Light – Light can symbolize many things, such as hope, transition, escape, and even death (e.g. Poltergeist’s “Don’t go into the light!”) Sunlight normally provides a sense of comfort so the incongruity of sunlight and horror can be especially unnerving, such as the graveyard scene in Night of the Living Dead (1968). Candles, lanterns, and flashlights are common sources of light in horror, as the light can only be cast so far while the surrounding darkness is rife with shadows. In this early scene from Hellraiser (1987) the dangling light bulbs in the torture room instantly sets the tone.

INT. TORTURE ROOM - NIGHT

The bare bulbs in the room we've entered swing violently, disorienting us. There are chains - dozens of them - disappearing with the darkness of the ceiling: all are swinging back and forth. Some end in hooks, with pieces of skin and sinew adhering; some are serrated, others simply drip blood.


In the claustrophobic British horror film The Descent (2005), a group of female friends on a caving expedition become hunted by inhuman creatures. The women are trapped in virtual darkness underground and light is their only friend as the creatures are blind. Light and dark are often used thematically to represent good and evil, hence the horror of the night and the hope of a new dawn if you’ve managed to survive.

5. Weapons – A majority of horror films involve the use of weapons, from machine guns to saws. Weapons have phallic symbolism that suggests masculine power and the woman that outsmarts the villain essentially castrates him. Leatherface's weapon in the Texas Chainsaw Massacre (1974) is the ultimate phallic symbol of raging power. The type of weapons a writer chooses for his or her villain – knife, gun, sword, club, saw –is most powerful when it reflects character; Leatherface lives on and on for this very reason.

6. Fabric – Fabric appears in many forms in horror, such as drapes, tapestries, and furniture dust coverings. Fabric can disguise horror and intensify it through movement or the suggested presence of something behind it. The protagonist can also hide behind fabric, but of course is not protected by it. In The Others (2001), the mother hears voices in the home and enters a room where all the stored items are covered with dust cloths. As the voices intensify, she begins pulling down the cloths to try to reveal the source. In this film, fabric is used as a metaphor for covering the dark truth the mother refuses to accept, that she murdered her own children. The curtains that are always closed in the home also emphasize this. Once the mother accepts the truth, there is no need for curtains and they can live in the light.

7. Keys/Locks – Keys and locks symbolize secrets, confinement, and hidden objects or places. In The Skeleton Key, Caroline is trying to solve her patient Ben’s paralyzed condition. Her skeleton key works in every room in the house except one in the attic. She manages to get inside the room and discovers a host of disturbing secrets that will lead to her own demise. In The Others, the mother must constantly lock and unlock doors to prevent light from reaching her children who have a rare condition and will die if exposed to sunlight. In this film, the keys and locks represent her confined thinking as well as her physical confinement in purgatory. Only when she accepts the truth can all the doors be left unlocked, like the curtains can come down.

8. Doors and Windows – Doors and windows (or any portal) have many symbolic meanings. Often, they help symbolize characterization. With windows, a person has a limited perspective and is like a spectator, not part of the outside world. The person looking through the window may be frightened of the world outside or physically unable to be part of it. In The Others, the mother is often by the window looking out, trapped in her home because of her children and a dense fog. At the end, she and her children stand by the window looking at a world they no longer belong to. On the other hand, a character can walk through a door and doors are symbolic of opportunity. In horror, however, doors and windows are typically a means of entrapment or freedom. They are also highly utilized for building suspense… is something behind the slightly open door or lurking outside the window in the dark? In Night of the Living Dead, doors and windows are dangerous openings that the zombies can infiltrate, despite efforts to block them up. Some of the most frightening scenes are when zombie hands reach in through spaces between the wooden boards. Windows can also personify a haunted house as eyes, such as the always glowing, quarter-round windows in Amityville Horror.

9. Labyrinths/Mazes – Mazes and labyrinths have often appeared in horror to heighten the protagonist’s lack of control. From the hedge maze in The Shining to the complex labyrinth of the underground Hive in Resident Evil, they offer many opportunities for sudden surprises around the corner, trap doors, circular action, and a sense of improbability for escape. In Resident Evil, the characters are aware of the labyrinth’s dangers:

INT. CONNECTING CORRIDOR

MATT and ALICE advance through the gloom. Every shadow hides a potential horror.

ALICE
I swear we’ve been here before.

They stop at a four-way junction.

ALICE
This place is a labyrinth.


MATT
I hope not. Every good labyrinth
has a monster at its heart.

Alice stares at him.

MATT
Didn’t they teach you about the
Minotaur at school?

10. Dolls – Dolls have appeared often in horror storytelling. The incongruity of a child’s toy and danger can make it unnerving, as dolls normally represent happiness, innocence, and nurturing. Yet their distorted human qualities, such as oversized heads, unblinking eyes or exaggerated features, can make them especially eerie. Doll appearances can be subtle, such as the marionette in The Others. The doll on a sting represents a figure that is not in control of its movements or destiny, much like the mother despite her efforts. It is also a moment when she shockingly connects to ‘the other side’ and her lifelong definitions of human reality are completely rattled. Dolls can also take a leading role, such as in the evil Chucky series. The same unnerving effect has been used with clowns, though they have been so overused as to have lost much of their effect. Dolls, on the other hand, come in so many forms, from voodoo to Barbie dolls and battered antique to contemporary ones, that they offer vast opportunities for symbolic use. A doll’s symbolism, which may be expressed through children’s play or other means, might include sexuality, lack of control, death, desire, regret, families, aging, and much more.

11. Masks – from the Phantom of the Opera to slasher classics, masks are most often used to disguise evil. Masks are devoid of movement, except for the eyes, which makes them unnerving, like doll faces. In The Texas Chainsaw Massacre, Leatherface wears three different masks (made from human skin) that reflect his mood or victim. And who will ever forget hockey-masked Jason or white-faced Michael Myers? On occasion, the villain behind the mask may be a woman. The Japanese film, Carved: The Slit-Mouthed Woman (2007), is based on an urban legend that claims a suburban town was terrorized by the spirit of a woman whose beautiful face had been horribly disfigured. She would roam the streets wearing a long coat and surgical mask. She would approach her young victims and, while removing the mask, ask them if she was pretty. Their response would inevitably lead to their violent demise. Masks have been over-utilized in horror films so writers should be cautious and inventive in how they disguise their villains if it is important to the story to do so.

12. Mirrors – Mirrors, or a mirror effect such as reflections in glass or water, can have many symbolic meanings though typically represent the multiple dualities of characters. Broken mirrors have obvious connotations of shattered lives and personalities. Mirrors can also represent voyeuristic, vanity, and sexual themes – we display our bodies and beautify ours faces in front of them in private. Mirrors can also reflect dangers. The following scene from Halloween: H20 (1998) is a good example of how effective this can be as a sudden scare tactic:
Linda swipes her palm across the fogged-up mirror, wiping away the steam...

ON the MIRROR. In its reflection we see Molly and Linda... then --

THE SHAPE

appears from the cloud of steam behind them!


The mirror has been the subject of many films, including Alexandre Aja’s 2008 film Mirrors, which is based on the 2003 Korean film Into the Mirror. In these films the mirror is a gateway between good and evil, its symbolism similar to doors, gates, and windows.

13. Rope – Rope has many symbolic meanings, from bondage, flogging, and death (the noose) to a means of escape or survival. In horror, ropes are most often used as a form of bondage. This symbolism has been used since the dawn of horror cinema and has symbolic importance today. In the opening of James Whale's Frankenstein (1931), one of the first shots is a pair of hands pulling on a rope; hands lowering a coffin before grave robbers Dr. Frankenstein and his assistant pull it back up in front of a statue of the Grim Reaper. Later in the opening sequence, they cut a condemned man down from the rope of a gallows but are disappointed that they’ll need a different brain as his neck was severed.

Symbolism can be very powerful and is an important tool that writers can use to enhance theme and character. When working on your next screenplay, consider how everyday objects can be used to effectively alter mood. Even a paper doll can be salaciously scary if in the right hands!

This article is excerpted from a series for ConstructingHorror.com, a site dedicated to horror storytelling. In addition to her participation on this site, Sara Caldwell is the author of three books, including Splatter Flicks: How to Make Low Budget Horror Films. Splatter Flicks is a comprehensive guide that shows aspiring filmmakers exactly how today’s most successful creators of horror finance, produce, and market their films. Check it out HERE.

Monday, July 07, 2008

Writers on the Storm Deadlines + more Quarterfinalists!


Hey Stormies!

Well, we’re into the home stretch. As usual, you guys all wait till the end and then hammer us with the submissions. I know, I know, I’m a writer, too. I do the same thing all the time. Yeah, a deadline gets me moving. If I know I have 2 months, it gets back-burnered until the red alert kicks in -- yikes, 48 hours, I better get a move on!

Now I know our deadlines are a bit confusing, so let me try to explain this all as clearly as I can.

Our REGULAR DEADLINE is midnight 7/11. That means any script submitted to Writers on the Storm (at www.writerstorm.com or www.withoutabox.com) before that time gets into the contest at the $40 rate.

Our FINAL DEADLINE is midnight 7/27. For the period from 7/12 through 7/27, the price jumps to $50 for any script submitted at www.writerstorm.com or www.withoutabox.com. That’s the honest and true FINAL deadline, y’all. No extensions. 7/28, we’re out.

However -- and this is where it gets just a mite tricky -- you can also enter the contest through Coverage, Ink (www.coverageink.com) if you want a full script analysis. If you do that, entry into the contest is automatic and free, right up till 7/27. And there is no price increase. In other words, there’s only one deadline on the CI side -- 7/27. Send in your script for coverage any time up till midnight 7/27 and you’re in. Get it? Are we cool? ;)

And once again, here's an update on our current quarterfinalists. These are folks who entered the contest via submitting their scripts to Coverage Ink for screenplay coverage, and they represent approximately the top 10% of submissions to CI since the contest began.

Congrats to our Writers on the Storm 2008 quarterfinalists so far:

Heather Upton, Belfast Boys
CA Bennett, Death Valley Dig
Kelly Murry, La Matadora
AC Yacobian, Rasta Pasta
Aaron Marshall, The Last Adventure of Martin Finch
Alan Sproles & Lizanne Southgate, Eden Lost
Rich Sheehy, Sliding Into Home
Paul Sargia, The Man Who Could Stop Time
Steven Zawacki, Orcadia
Suzanne Darling, Brush With Fame
Dennis Bailey, Pound For Pound
Chris Jopling, Blacklights
Andrew Zeoli & Christian Wagner, Blue Ballers
Attila Nagy, Garen Inboden & Gilbert Inboden, Enlighten Up
Russ Meyer, Organic Svengali
Vito LaBruno, The Last American Guido
Adam Nur, Jetpack
Nisso Cohen, The Source
Mark Eaton & Stacy Dymalski, Center of Fortitude
Art Blum, Back from the Dead
Patrick Nicholas, Edgewater
Michael Coleman, Jr., Clone


Will one of these guys be the big winner and pocket 10 grand??? Too early to tell! But a lot of 'em are polishing their scripts based on the coverage and resubmitting (their quarterfinalist status locked in.) Does that mean they have a leg up on all of y’all who just enter the contest directly? Maybe, maybe not! Depends how well they execute and how well your own screenplay gets it done. There’s plenty more room up there!

Oh, one last thing -- this year we have far fewer scripts over 120 pages than ever before. That’s fantastic. As most of you know, that’s the very first thing you’re judged on by the industry. D-Girls and creative execs assume if you can’t tell your story in 120 or less that you don’t have the discipline or editing skills yet to be worthy of serious consideration. It’s just the way it is, stormies! If you all take nothing else away from this, remember that first impressions count. If an exec picks up your script and sighs at the prospect of a 124-page trudge, you’ve already lost points. So get out that McCullough Eager Beaver chainsaw and rev that baby up and don’t stop till you’re at 115. You’ll be glad you did.

Love y’all!

Portia Jefferson
Writers on the Storm Contest Coordinator

REFLECTING POOL opens in NYC


Earlier this year I wrote that this film “may just be the ‘All the President’s Men’ of our time.” THE REFLECTING POOL is a stunning narrative work that dares to (convincingly) challenge the official 9-11 story. With any serious discussion of 9-11 blacked out of our national media, it’s up to independent media and filmmakers like Jarek Kupsc to bring it to the people. As New York City prepares to vote on the historic 9-11 Ballot Initiative (www.nyc911initiative.org), which will launch the first-ever independent investigation the events of September 11th, Kupsc’s film also represents the first theatrical run of any film questioning 9-11 in the US.

This from Kupsc: “We are proud to announce the much-anticipated World Theatrical Premiere of the groundbreaking investigative drama THE REFLECTING POOL at the Pioneer Theater in New York City on July 11, 2008. This is a historic event. Please join us for these landmark shows from 7/11-7/18 and pass this message to all your New York friends. We will be doing Q&A after every show.

Read about the New York 9/11 Ballot Initiative in The Village Voice. THE REFLECTING POOL supports this important action to establish a new independent investigation of the most controversial tragedy of our time.”

Visit "The Reflecting Pool" web site HERE.

Sunday, June 29, 2008

WOTS QUARTERFINALISTS (so far)


Hi folks, here are the writers who have made the Writers on the Storm 2008 quarterfinals so far. These are folks who sent their script to Coverage Ink for analysis and received a free contest entry. Their scripts scored a 'consider with reservations' for script or better--which is right around top 10% of submissions (same as if you submit it directly to the contest at www.writerstorm.com.)

Congrats, folks!

Heather Upton, Belfast Boys
CA Bennett, Death Valley Dig
Kelly Murry, La Matadora
AC Yacobian, Rasta Pasta
Aaron Marshall, The Last Adventure of Martin Finch
Alan Sproles & Lizanne Southgate, Eden Lost
Rich Sheehy, Sliding Into Home
Paul Sargia, The Man Who Could Stop Time
Steven Zawacki, Orcadia
Suzanne Darling, Brush With Fame
Dennis Bailey, Pound For Pound
Chris Jopling, Blacklights
Andrew Zeoli & Christian Wagner, Blue Ballers
Attila Nagy, Garen Inboden & Gilbert Inboden, Enlighten Up
Russ Meyer, Organic Svengali
Vito LaBruno, Last American Guido
Adam Nur, Jetpack


Contest regular deadline is 7/11. Final deadline is 7/27. Check out the website for more info. So let's all root these guys on! And still time for you to get yours in, too. We look forward to you blowing us away!

Jim C.

Showdown of the Godz at Comic-Con!


Coverage, Ink's first production, the 15-minute comedy Showdown of the Godz, premieres on the west coast at Comic-Con 2008! Needles to say, we're pretty stoked.
The film screens Saturday, July 26 from 4:15-4:50pm in room 26AB.
SHOWDOWN OF THE GODZ
showdownofthegodz.com
Jesse (David Gasman) is the world’s biggest Japanese monster movie fan. Trapped in a stultifying insurance job and a deteriorating marriage, the only bright spot in his life is his obsession with a certain Japanese monster, which he shares with his adorable 7-year-old daughter Cassie (Ayla Guttman.) Jesse’s power attorney wife Mary (Alixx Schottland) drags them into counseling, where Jesse reluctantly promises he will forgo all things monstrous for one week to focus on the family.

But when Jesse sees a rare monster toy on display at NYC’s Monster Sushi, he challenges proprietor Ono (George Takei) to a Japanese monster trivia contest. If Jesse wins, he gets the coveted toy. If he loses, he owes Ono $1,000. Ono accepts on one condition: Jesse must face “a representative from Monster Sushi” -- legendary Japanese monster movie archivist Matsuhisa Jin. Jesse goes into geek overdrive preparing for the showdown. But on the eve of the event, Mary leaves him. Devastated, Jesse is a no-show. But wise Ono has one last surprise up his sleeve that may just pull the family back together...

Hope to see you all there!

Sunday, June 22, 2008

Script Girl Report Fri June 20th 2008

Who is she? We don't know, but she's got her finger on the pulse, and she's bringing it to the people! Here is the latest Script Girl spec sales report. The fact that there's enough activity to even warrant these reports is, of course, awesome.


Click above to watch!

Saturday, June 21, 2008

TRACK ATTACK: trackingb.com INTERVIEW

by Jim Cirile

We first learned about trackingb.com last year. Run by a mysterious entity known only as “The Insider,” trackingb.com is a real, live industry tracking board. Uh... what’s that? Well, actual movie industry development folks --- agents, managers, creative executives and assistants -- use this board to swap info about specs going out, who’s looking for what. It’s a peek behind the curtain -- but if used properly, it can also be a significant marketing tool. How? Read on.

We caught up with The Insider, where he was busy doing… we can’t tell you. Anonymity is fine by us when we can be the beneficiaries of his (or her) cunning ;)

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Jim Cirile: Tell us, what was the genesis of trackingb.com?

The Insider: Trackingb.com was started to provide an open online network for entertainment industry professionals and aspiring professionals to share information. It has since evolved into the #1 interactive online tracking board in Hollywood. The site draws the tastemakers and buzzmakers of the entertainment community: A-list screenwriters, directors, and producers, top agents, elite managers, and executives from the major studios and production companies, as well as those aspiring to these positions.

Jim: For those not in the know, gives us a quick primer on what tracking is. Many writers have no clue tracking even exists.

Insider:
Tracking is essentially the sharing of information between entertainment professionals. This includes new scripts/books/comics hitting the market, up-to-the-minute tracking reports on which literary properties are getting heat or selling, cool industry jobs, executive hires and fires, and other industry news.

Jim: But why is it beneficial for companies who may be rivals, say, both bidding on a script, to share information?

Insider: If someone is bidding, they won't share the information... but the agent or manager sure will in order to try and create a more intense bidding situation. People know that sometimes you've got to give to get. As more and more members join and start contributing, our site gets even better, and that benefits everyone.

Jim: Tracking can kill a spec faster than a poison arrow to the heart... or it can help create buzz.


Insider: Yep. When a script is listed on our site, it's amazing how quickly a writer and their representation receive interest from a who's who of the Hollywood community. Trackingb.com was created as a positive and productive place for the entertainment community to conduct business. We track a spec's positive movement mostly. If something isn't connecting or selling, it's obvious...


Jim: Okay, so can you give us a heads-up on how trackingb.com works?

Insider: If a literary property is going out from legitimate representation, the rep/writer/producer lets us know and we get it up on the site. Then, the fun begins as reps receive requests for the script. We track the script's progress as it moves into production companies and studios and progresses towards a potential sale or pass. We also post a ton of other valuable information, as well. One very popular section of our site is our jobs section, where we list great inside job listings that you won't find anywhere else. These include: creative executive positions, jobs assisting executives at companies like Jerry Bruckheimer Films, and even openings to assist A-list actors.

Jim: Cool. Who are some of the agencies, prodcos, etc., who use trackingb?

Insider: You name the studio or agency, and we've got someone from there on our board. The William Morris Agency, CAA, Paradigm, UTA, Paramount, Universal, CBS Films, Fox, Katalyst Films, Flower Films, Gold Circle Films, JK Livin, Infinitum Nihil, Kaplan/Perrone, Energy Entertainment and the list goes on and on... People are always surprised at the high level of execs trolling our board.

Jim: Can someone who signs up for trackingb post anything they want to the boards, or are they just a fly on the wall? And if you can post, how do you prevent someone from just spamming the whole group and thus turning execs off?

Insider: The board is run by The Insider... Only (s)he can put up a post in order to protect the integrity of the board. However, comments on posts are allowed. We only list literary material that we can confirm is going out from legitimate representation.

Jim: So clue us in on how subscribing to trackingb can be useful to a writer.

Insider: Obviously, the more you understand the game, the better chance you have of winning at it. Seeing the kinds of concepts and scripts that generate interest from representation and executives can be enormously helpful for a writer interested in selling scripts to Hollywood. As is knowing who the players are and how the process of selling a spec script works. The more informed you are as a writer, the better chance you have of succeeding. We're just a piece of that info puzzle.

Jim: What are some things writers who sign up for trackingb need to be aware of -- rules of etiquette, pros and cons?

Insider: Just understand that we're not an agency. We're here to report on scripts that are represented and being taken out to the market. Our screenplay contest is our vehicle for helping new writers connect to the industry. And from our inaugural contest, a bunch of our award winners
secured legitimate representation, and one has major interest in his finalist script right now. We hope to be reporting its sale on our site soon!

Jim: Thanks so much for your time, dude... or dudette. Anything else you'd like to tell our readers?

Insider: Yeah... Get The Inside Track today! Only $69/year. Cue the used car salesman, "This deal won't last long!"

Check them out at www.trackingb.com.

Writers on the Storm... Stormwatch!

Hey Stormies!

Things are getting pretty busy around here, and that’s the way we like it. It’s always like that as you enter the final weeks of a contest. I hope you’re all shining that script to a blinding brilliance. When ready, dazzle us! And yes, if you need extra time, our final deadline is 7/27. It’s $40 until 7/11, but the price goes up $10 after that.

And now just like last month, it’s my pleasure to present our current quarterfinalists. These are folks who entered the contest via submitting their scripts to Coverage Ink for screenplay coverage, and they represent approximately the top 10% of submissions to CI since the contest began.

Congrats to our Writers on the Storm 2008 quarterfinalists so far:

Heather Upton, Belfast Boys
CA Bennett, Death Valley Dig
Kelly Murry, La Matadora
AC Yacobian, Rasta Pasta
Aaron Marshall, The Last Adventure of Martin Finch
Alan Sproles & Lizanne Southgate, Eden Lost
Rich Sheehy, Sliding Into Home
Paul Sargia, The Man Who Could Stop Time
Steven Zawacki, Arcadia
Suzanne Darling, Brush With Fame
Dennis Bailey, Pound For Pound
Chris Jopling, Blacklights

As always, you can enter either through Coverage, Ink or directly to the contest at www.writerstorm.com. We’ve also enabled entry through www.withoutabox.com, so if you already have your information uploaded there, you can enter WOTS zippy quick. Some of you are even -- gasp! -- still sending in hard copies via U.S. Mail! Amazing how few, though. The age of the PDF is upon us for sure!

And now, I’ve got scripts to read! Lots of ‘em. Strangely, a lot of you out there want to win 10 grand. Nowadays, that’s a good three fill-ups! (not really laughing.)

Love y’all!

Portia Jefferson
Writers on the Storm Contest Coordinator

Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Pitchfest! Go! Now!


Interview by Jim Cirile

Great American Pitchfest blazes into the Marriott Burbank Hotel & Convention Center this weekend (June 20-22). Over 100 companies are slated to attend. You ARE going, aren’t you? ;)

Why do we love Great American Pitchfest so much? Simple – unlike other pitch fests that limit you to 4 or 5 meetings, with Great American Pitchfest, the average is **12-20 meetings**, sometimes more -- all for the same flat fee. Plus all day Saturday they’ve got an incredible array of FREE seminars by top screenwriting gurus like Blake Snyder and Michael Hauge. So even if you’re not pitching, stop by beautiful downtown Burbank this weekend! Pitches are on Sunday, and there’s no better way to barnstorm a whole passel full o’ industry lickety-split.

Coverage, Ink has been to many pitch fests, but we really like the way these guys run their ship. Like CI, the principals are writers themselves and really do care about empowering emerging screenwriters. For more about the Pitchfest, including companies list & bios, and to enroll, please visit their web site at www.pitchfest.com. And don’t forget the discount code listed above to get $50 off!

We chatted with writer/producers Signe Olynyk and Bob Schultz, partners in the Great American Pitchfest, to find out exactly how their event works and what to expect.

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Jim Cirile: One thing that always petrifies me going into one of these events is not understanding how it works. You don’t know what to expect. Are you going to be herded into lines? Will you get to meet with the exec you want? Give us an idea of how the mechanics of the Pitchfest work.

Signe Olynyk: Ours is quite different from any other pitch event out there. First of all, we take the biggest ballroom that we can find, and we have at least 100 companies throughout this room. They’re all spread at least ten feet apart so there’s privacy between the tables. And in the hallway outside, we have 100 corresponding lines. Say you want to meet Village Roadshow at table 30. You would get into line 30. And you also get the booklet, and the booklet is probably also worth the price of admission. The booklet has all 100 companies listed, but it also has at least a page for each dedicated to what they’re looking for, what their credits are and what they’ve done in the past.

Bob Schultz: What they’re *not* looking for can be just as important.

Signe: Exactly. It’s also got information about stars they have relationships with, budgets they work with, advice to writers and their contact information. At some other pitch fests, you don’t even get the name of the person you’re meeting with. You also get this information in advance, so you know which companies to target specifically for your project.

Jim: How do you manage 100 lines?

Signe: You have a great guy like Bob involved.

Bob: Armed with the booklet, most of the participants arrive with a strategy in mind. You have people who know exactly what they’re going for when they get into that line. So managing the lines is not that difficult. Controlling 500 participants is not that hard when we’ve given them the information ahead of time.

Jim: Let’s say you’ve got a big producer whom everyone wants to talk to, and that person has 25 people on line. But maybe there’s a lesser known or emerging producer with only two or three people in line. Is it a concern that some participants might exhaust all their time waiting in line for the big boys?

Signe: For every five participants who attend, we invite another company. So the lines rarely get longer than five people on average. And for those companies that we expect to be more popular, we try to get more than one representative from the company. That right away cuts the lines in half.

Bob: Also it’s a strategic choice. Some people are going to target one company in particular, and they’re satisfied because they’re focused like a laser beam on exactly who they want. Other people’s strategy is to pitch to as many people as possible. So the different approaches (people take) helps our lines stay more even-keeled.

Jim: How do you manage the timing? Does everyone get five minutes, and you just ring a buzzer at the end of each round?

Signe: We have a cowbell that rings at five minutes, and we also mark the 4-minute mark so they know they have a minute left in their pitch. But the meetings can be as long as the executive wants. All we do is simply hold the line.

Jim: Really? Does that happen often? And does it create any sort of resentment?

Bob: One of my favorite aspects of our event is the atmosphere of community, “we’re all in this together.” Even if I’ve been waiting on line for two or three rounds for, say, 20th Century Fox or Lionsgate, when the writer who got the extended meeting comes out, he’s getting high fives and fist bumps. Everybody is excited to cheer on somebody who found success. It inspires everyone else. A rising tide raises all ships.

Jim: Wow. Okay, let’s say an executive decides to keep a writer for an extra two minutes. They’re now three minutes into the next pitch cycle. What do you do at that point? Does the next guy only get three minutes? And if you hold the line, what does the executive do in the meantime — sit staring into space?

Bob: We encourage the executives to do things such as drink water and use the restroom as well.

Jim: Oh, you fiend! So it would actually behoove an exec to hold a writer for an additional 30 seconds past the beginning of the round, then kick him to the curb so he can have 4½ minutes off, right?

Bob: (laughs) Unfortunately, labor laws prevent us from chaining our executives to their seats.

Jim: It all sounds ridiculously organized. How did you guys arrive at this system?

Signe: I started the event in Canada, actually. I had gone to a number of screenwriting conferences in Los Angeles as a writer and as a producer, and I got very frustrated. I felt they were disorganized and had a lot of problems. For the record, I want to say I encourage everyone to go to every event they can, because every opportunity you can get to meet someone who might further your career is something you have to do. So I started the event in Canada, and it worked great, so I thought we should take this to LA because I didn’t see the events in Los Angeles were getting any better. I felt writers were being taken advantage of.

Jim: At this point, how many companies do you have attending? And how many are last-minute additions?

Bob: Over 100. We wound up with a grand total of about 110 last year. We probably (confirmed) as many as 50 or 75 of them in the last week. The industry is so built around networking that as soon as we got two or three really good companies, then suddenly the number of companies grew exponentially because everyone calls their friends. Next thing you know, executives are doing all our work (recruiting other) executives for us.

Signe: We’ve got companies like Village Roadshow this year, Morgan Creek, Lionsgate, Fox Searchlight… we’ve got more agents contacting us than we’ve ever had. This is the best year that I’ve seen yet for our participants to really get some consideration, be it getting their scripts optioned, hired for writing assignments or signing with agents or managers.

Jim: One of my best connections in town I met at a pitch event 10 years ago. I think it’s important for writers to keep in mind that it’s not just about selling something or getting signed but possibly creating new long-term relationships.

Signe: It happens all the time. A woman called me up just a few weeks ago to tell me that her short was being screened in Cannes. She got the short made through connections she made at our Pitchfest. We’ve had lots of people sign with agents or managers. We’re around 60 success stories now. Every year we get at least ten more.

Bob: Last year I ran into a couple of friends of mine at my college reunion and told them what I was doing. They loved the idea of Pitchfest and decided to come out. They’re now moving forward with their pilot. They went from having this idea collecting dust on a shelf to in a matter of weeks actively developing a show with a producer. Coming to the event can definitely be the spark that starts the fire.

Jim: Thanks, guys, for hosting such a great event. See you there!

Visitwww.pitchfest.com for more info

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Tuesday, June 17, 2008

ALGO POR MI? Sí!

Yes, a year later, we are still getting some play on Writers on the Storm 2007 Runner Up script “Algo Por Mi,” written by Juan Sebastian Jacome. Just this week the script was requested by George Lopez’ company Encanto Enterprises, as well as by Gregory Nava’s agent at ICM. Sometimes these things take time to build a head of steam. In the meantime, Mr. Jacome is building quite a head of steam on his own, and he wrote in to share this great news: “I got a screenwriting fellowship in Spain. It's kind of like a big deal. It is a Lab organized by Fundación Carolina and Ibermedia (like the Sundance Lab). Only 16 Latin Americans get in every year. I am one of them this year.” Jacome’s strong showing in Writers on the Storm helped get him in. Big round of applause for Juan! Go, go, go!!!!

Saturday, May 31, 2008

Writers on the Storm contest update


Hey, Stormies!

Well, we are now one month in to the contest, and we now proudly present our quarterfinalists! Ready? Okay, maybe not *all* our quarterfinalists. Any of y’all who sent in your script to Coverage, Ink after the contest start date got entered automatically. If the script gets a “consider with reservations” or better for script (roughly top 10%) you’re an automatic quarterfinalist. And we are pleased to announce we have six of y’all so far (in no particular order):

Heather Upton, Belfast Boys
Alan Sproles & Lizanne Southgate, Eden Lost
A.C. Yacobian, Rasta Pasta
Kelly Murry, La Matadora
Rich Sheehy, Sliding Into Home
C.A. Bennett, Death Valley Dig

Awesome! Those of you who entered at writerstorm.com or withoutabox, it’s going to be a while until you get word back on your script (when we announce the full quarterfinalist list after the end of the contest.)

Of course, it’s just the first month, and the deluge generally doesn’t come till the last month. If you guys are like me, you’re probably constantly retooling your material; naturally you want to submit the best possible draft to a contest (or industry, obviously.) But now let me clue you in to a poorly kept industry secret: the dreaded *contest extension syndrome* (shiver.) Here’s how it works. Screenwriting contests (including this one in the past) would announce a contest end date. So all of y’all would scramble to get it in by then, and then — surprise — a last-minute 3-week extension! Grr! Pretty much every darn contest does this, and personally? I find it a bit irritating. I mean, I don’t like rushing to make an artificial deadline only to find out I killed myself for nothing, and heck, I could’ve taken practically an extra month! I mean, okay, I appreciate the kick in the booty, because you know, it actually makes me get it in gear and produce. But still, right?

So this year: I’m telling every one of y’all right now — there WILL BE AN EXTENSION. Okay? The standard deadline is 7/11, but the FINAL deadline (which really really is final) is midnight 7/27. BUT: the price goes up on 7/12. So if you submit late, you’re gonna get dinged. Hopefully this will eliminate anyone feeling put out for rushing to meet a deadline ‘cause if you make the regular deadline, you’ll save ten bucks. Jim tells me that Coverage, Ink, however, will not be raising prices during the late period — entry into WOTS will remain free throughout the final deadline if you submit to CI.

As for the contest submissions so far, we’ve seen some interesting material so far. There are a handful of very good marketable concepts, which is great to see, and one the studios would probably hate but I love. I read a compelling political drama the other day, and today I read a romantic comedy with fantastic writing but the second act just ran out of gas. And on and on it goes! I love checking out the immense outpouring of creativity and talent. If there’s one conclusion I can draw after working on Writers on the Storm, it’s that there are very few *bad scripts.* More often than not, the problem is in the writer’s craft and execution, and that stuff just takes practice and mentorship. I’d be nothing without my UCLA mentor. That said, quarterfinalist Kelly Murry tells us ‘La Matadora’ is her first script. Yeah, I know, I’m jealous, too!

Questions? Praise? Venom? E-mail me! Just shoot a mail over to writerstorm@gmail.com. I read and respond to every mail personally. We’re gonna try our hardest to treat your script fairly and give it the attention it deserves. Love y’all!

Portia Jefferson
Writers on the Storm Contest Coordinator

Wednesday, May 28, 2008

SCRIPTWRITERS NETWORK COMES ABOARD W.O.T.S.


I’ve been in L.A. a long time, and I’m embarrassed to say I only recently discovered these guys – and you should, too. Scriptwriters Network is a 503(c)(3) Non-Profit Organization with an all-volunteer staff. For over 20 years, for a dirt-cheap annual fee, they’ve been offering monthly Q&A seminars from top industry talent, staged readings, field trips, studio tours, industry get-togethers, outreach programs and even a high school fellowship program! These guys are the real deal. And they're giving a 1-year membership to the winner of Writers on the Storm.

Their next event is a 1-hour TV panel featuring writer/producers of shows like “Ugly Betty,” “Samantha Who?”, “Battlestar Galactica,” “Buffy the Vampire Slayer,” and much more! We’ll be bringing you an interview with Scriptwriters Network president Michael Engel in July. Check them out HERE. --Jim C.

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Monday, May 26, 2008

CI Book Review: "Writing Drama"

by C. Elizabeth Peters

“Writing Drama: a Comprehensive Guide for Playwrights and Scriptwriters,” by French writer/director/teacher Yves Lavandier, is an exhaustively thorough text (almost 600 pages) that leaves no stone unturned. The fact that plays and screenplays are two different mediums, governed by different structural and aesthetic rules, does not matter here, because the principles that Lavandier discusses transcends both and gets to the heart of truly great storytelling. This is a fascinating and incredibly in-depth book that is academic in nature, full of systems and definitions. It’s “Gray’s Anatomy” for plays and screenplays, taking every kind of dramatic system apart so that writers can see how it all fits together.

Lavandier begins with the basics; he discusses at length how to create conflict, emotion, and obstacles that are effective to keep the story interesting. He then moves on to the finer points of structure. The book also includes analysis of a play (Moliere’s “The School for Wives”) and a screenplay (Hitchcock’s “North by Northwest”), numerous appendices such as Documentaries, Short films, and Writing for Children, as well as writing workshop exercises. Lavandier follows each defined concept with a long list of examples – everything from Shakespeare to “The Simpsons,” contemporary movies and plays as well as classics.

Although his range of referenced works is impressive (1,400 works are referenced!) Lavandier sometimes lets his opinion of certain work be what matters most, and occasionally dismisses works that have seen box office and critical success if they do not employ all of his theories. Some of the works that don’t work, according to Lavandier, are “Rain Man,” “Titanic,” “Dead Poets Society,” and “Vertigo.” Meanwhile, listed among works that “work” are names of movies that are not very well known, at least in the U.S.

But make no mistake: opinionated or not, Lavandier knows what he is talking about, and his examples prove to be excellent illustrations of his concepts. I’m unaware of another book that devotes an entire chapter to the correct and effective use of dramatic irony and another chapter to symbolism! It’s refreshing to see an author go the extra mile instead of stopping at “you need a character with a goal, and obstacles to that goal.” There is so much more going on in works of drama, and this book clearly demonstrates as such. Give this book time, and slowly Lavandier’s analyses of so many different works coalesce into a thorough understanding of, well, writing drama. And for screenwriters, that is invaluable.

A caveat to readers in the United States, especially those living in Los Angeles and immersed in the belly of the beast: Lavandier is European, and his book often makes snide references to American cinema as childish and overindulgent in violence and spectacle. Let that go and focus on the concepts behind what he is saying. Lavandier’s book truly is a comprehensive guide, and any screenwriter (or playwright) that applies the principles set forth in “Writing Drama” to their work will create results that are well above average. Recommended!

For more info on WRITING DRAMA: click HERE
To order WRITING DRAMA: click HERE.

Free Screenwriting Software? Yep! Meet SCRIPPED


I remember clearly when my friend and fellow (former) ‘Creative Screenwriting’ columnist Michael Lent urged me to “come toward the light.” It was in 2000, and we had just landed a page-1 rewrite deal. Michael used Final Draft and felt it would be easier to collaborate using it. But I resisted. I was perfectly happy using -- brace yourself -- Word Perfect 3.0. I had all my macros set up; it worked perfectly. Well, just one teensy weensy problem—pagination. See, because word processors don’t split up your dialogue properly over a page break, this had to be done manually. And when rewrite time comes around? Oh, what a nightmare. You have to remove all those “mores” and “continueds,” because the positions will shift as you edit the script. When at last I relented and got FD, and it was as if the heavens opened and the freakin’ angels sang “Shine On You Crazy Diamond.”

For those of you still toughing it out using a word processor for screenwriting, (about 25% of you based on the submissions to Coverage, Ink) you’re avoiding screenwriting software for one of two reasons—you’re bull-headed like me ;) or you can’t afford Final Draft or Movie Magic Screenwriter. I hear that. Seriously, they ain’t cheap!

But now along comes SCRIPPED, and it may just be the coolest screenwriter’s accoutrement since Trader Joe’s Pound-Plus dark chocolate bars. Scripped is 100% FREE *online* screenwriting software. You read that right -- it runs in your freakin’ browser!

So what do you get for your (no) money?

- Online-based, no downloading, saves everything
- All the basic script elements are present
- Can import from FD and Word, export as PDF (industry standard)
- Good shortcuts for the basic stuff - tab to next element, etc.
- Did we mention it’s free?

Scripped is the brainchild of UCLA MBA student Sunil Rajaraman, USC Peter Stark Producers' program grad Zak Freer, and Ryan Buckley, an “MIT/Harvard dual degree genius!” says Rajaraman, who also proudly notes Scripped recently signed Ed Burns to their advisory board.

A few years back, Rajaraman and Freer had come up with an idea for an online screenwriting magazine – but the mission statement changed when the duo discovered Buckley had already developed a collaborative writing tool. “The three of us came together and formed what is now Scripped. The story is actually much longer, and much more interesting, but I'll spare you,” laughs Rajaraman. Scripped team member Kristen Azzam, also a UCLA MBA student, tells us that Scripped now has a user base of over 5,000 writers from over 50 countries and all 50 states.

So what’s not to like? Well, Scripped is still in the beta stage. And it is not as of yet as intuitive and full-featured as the big boys, who have had many years and big development budgets to smooth all the wrinkles. Some issues facing Scripped: it doesn’t yet have a smart type feature, which slows it down and means extra typing for the writer; no automatic continueds in dialogue; no automatic parentheses for parentheticals, mores, etc., and there’s no way to jump directly to scenes. Rajaraman responds, “The features you suggested are all things we have in development, but are not yet released. The reason (they’re not available) just yet is because they slow down the application considerably -- which is the reason why Google Docs will never be MS Word, or Excel.” But Rajaraman notes that they are streamlining the interface and implementing more functionality constantly “to help writers complete their works in a more timely fashion,” he says.

In time, Scripped plans to add new features to empower writers (we can't say what yet). They already have over 6,000 screenplays in their database. They also have a great blog and newsletter themselves, and are working to build Scripped into an indispensable screenwriting resource and community. We say bravo! I like these guys. To check out Scripped, just go to scripped.com and give it a whirl. The price is right.

--Jim Cirile

Friday, May 09, 2008

Verbinski to direct "BioShock"

Wow! This is super cool. One of the best PC games ever made to be brought to life by a super talented director? Sign us up. If you haven't played BioShock yet, (see our article on best games for writers below) you're missing our on a truly cool, creepy and immersive world. It's escapism at its finest. Here's the press release from publisher Take Two Interactive:

May 9, 2008

2K Games announced today that it has reached an agreement for "BioShock," the universally acclaimed smash-hit video game, to be developed as a feature film by Universal Pictures. 2K Games, whose 2K Boston and 2K Australia studios developed "BioShock," is a video game publishing label of Take-Two Interactive Software, Inc.


The prospect of bringing this blockbuster game to life has attracted not only a major studio, but top Hollywood talent. Gore Verbinski, director of the "Pirates of the Caribbean" trilogy, is slated to direct and produce the BioShock movie. John Logan, Academy Award-nominated writer of "Gladiator," "The Aviator" and "Sweeney Todd," is in talks to do the screenplay.

The expected release date and terms of the agreement were not disclosed.

An original property developed by 2K Games, "BioShock" is one of the most successful new interactive entertainment franchises to launch in recent years. A critical and consumer hit, BioShock has sold more than 2 million units worldwide since its release in August 2007. A sequel to the game, "BioShock 2," is planned for a release in 2009.

"We are excited that 2K Games' vision for 'BioShock' will be carried forward in a new medium," said Strauss Zelnick, Chairman of Take-Two. "'BioShock' has been hailed as one of the most highly cinematic and richly plotted titles in interactive entertainment, making it extremely well-suited to film. In partnering with Universal and Gore Verbinski, we have assembled a team that respects the uniqueness of 'BioShock' and will translate it into a powerful movie experience.”

Zelnick added, "Our ability to attract a major studio and unparalleled creative team speaks volumes about the strength of our 'BioShock' franchise. It also demonstrates how Take-Two is delivering value based on our strategy of creating and owning our industry’s most powerful intellectual property."

Christoph Hartmann, President of 2K Games, noted, "'BioShock' fans appreciate the depth and complexity of the game, and our partnership with Gore Verbinski will introduce the world of Rapture to an even wider audience. In addition to his impressive body of work, Gore is an avid video gamer and true fan of 'BioShock.' That was extremely important to us in deciding to move forward with this project."

Considered to be one the finest games in the history of interactive entertainment, "BioShock" unfolds as a deep and exciting adventure. Barely surviving a plane crash, the player lands in icy uncharted waters and discovers an undersea city called Rapture, a failed utopia whose citizens had embraced genetic engineering before the city descended into pure anarchy. Power and greed have run amok and the city has succumbed to civil war. It is a gripping game that forces the player to make complex moral choices. Fans have embraced "BioShock's" mysterious world filled with powerful technology and fascinating characters. "BioShock" is also renowned for its rich visual detail depicting a gorgeous Art Deco world set deep beneath the sea.

Monday, May 05, 2008

CI Client Wins Trigger Street Script of the Month

Screenwriter Mark Kratter's script WHERE THE DEAD GO, which he developed with me last year, has been named triggerstreet.com's script of the month! Kratter's writing chops are clearly on display in this thinking man's horror thriller about a geneticist sent to investigate a weaponized disease outbreak in Africa that gives the infected supernatural abilities. Kratter, a finalist in many contests (an earlier draft of this script was a quarterfinalist in last year's Writers on the Storm) clearly has big things ahead. Indeed, this bloody good script may well represent the future of horror, which for my money has burnt itself out lately with sadistic gore porn and lame CGI. The cool thing about WHERE THE DEAD GO is it always seems believable, no matter how fantastical things get--and did I mention it doesn't skimp on the blood?

So congrats again to Mark, and let's hope the SOM designation gets you some industry heat!

--Jim Cirile

Wednesday, April 23, 2008

Coverage Ink Client Sells Spec to Phoenix Pictures


Yeah! Now THAT'S what I'm talking about! I knew this one was a winner when I first read this script 3 years ago. There was incredible energy on the page, and Javier Rodriguez' action-packed Renaissance-era hitman story was unique and just damn cool. I hit him with a blizzard of notes but also a ton of encouragement. Empowered, Rodriguez didn't flinch and went on to deliver a polish that knocks your socks off. Which further proves my theory--if you're willing to listen to constructive criticism and put in some hard work, you will be rewarded. Check out the article on the sale from Variety.com:
Phoenix Pictures has snapped up Javier Rodriguez's spec script "The Heretic" and is fast-tracking the Renaissance-era action-adventure thriller.

Story revolves around a fallen priest-turned-hitman sent by a rogue archbishop to assassinate Martin Luther, only to discover that not everyone is telling the truth.

Phoenix's Mike Medavoy, Arnie Messer and David Thwaites will produce. Michael Connolly of Mad Hatter Films, which manages Rodriguez, will exec produce.

Phoenix plans to start production by the first quarter.

Phoenix is in production on action-thriller "Shutter Island," starring Leonardo DiCaprio and directed by Martin Scorsese, and announced last week that it's partnering with Gold Co. on "Amish Gone Wild." It's beginning production next month on spy thriller "Shanghai," helmed by Mikael Hafstrom.
Now is that kickass or WHAT? We say thee, huzzah! You rock, Javier!!!